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I hate that you're my every thought
That I wake with you on my mind
And fall asleep
To images of your smile

I hate that I adore you so
With gorgeous eyes
And sweet lips
I long to taste

I hate the way you make me feel
Like I need you to survive
As if breathing without you
Is excruciating

I hate that I yearn for you
I hunger for your touch
Every moment
Of every day

I hate the way I love you
With every beat
Of my wretched heart
That loving you keeps me alive
Yet keeps me alone
Self explanatory.

Constructive criticism or none at all, please. Thank you.
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KansasProjectSaint Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
So glad that I dont love anyone in this way. Id probably feel the same & then some.
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dreams-and-starlight Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course I'm not crying right now... not crying... still denying it. *sobbing my heart out* But yeah, I can sympathize with you.
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HunterTheShadow Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly how I'm feeling now... It's awesome
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That-crazy-fangirl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow. Describes the way I feel with the one I love...
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Exotixa Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
its beautiful..........
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aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
This.. this sums my feelings up perfectly!
Although I did not write it it is a physical representation of my very thougts, perhaps I am still more human than I thought, or you are less human than I think you are...

Anyway, I am probably going to screw up BIG TIME, but I will direct the woman I love here, even though she has a boyfriend she deserves to know. (Oh I am so afraid of the results)
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like to commend you on your bravery in sending the woman you love here. I certainly do hope it works out well for you! You never know what life has in store or how things may turn out. You never know, there might be no need to be afraid after all!!
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aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
well, somewhere it went wrong, she is now ignoring me :(
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Pheromone-Somniferum Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is me now.

Well done.
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shironomitsuki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
I can relate... awesome job on this one ^^
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