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I hate that you're my every thought
That I wake with you on my mind
And fall asleep
To images of your smile

I hate that I adore you so
With gorgeous eyes
And sweet lips
I long to taste

I hate the way you make me feel
Like I need you to survive
As if breathing without you
Is excruciating

I hate that I yearn for you
I hunger for your touch
Every moment
Of every day

I hate the way I love you
With every beat
Of my wretched heart
That loving you keeps me alive
Yet keeps me alone
Self explanatory.

Constructive criticism or none at all, please. Thank you.
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KansasProjectSaint Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014
So glad that I dont love anyone in this way. Id probably feel the same & then some.
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dreams-and-starlight Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Of course I'm not crying right now... not crying... still denying it. *sobbing my heart out* But yeah, I can sympathize with you.
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HunterTheShadow Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Exactly how I'm feeling now... It's awesome
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That-crazy-fangirl Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Hobbyist
Wow. Describes the way I feel with the one I love...
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Exotixa Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
its beautiful..........
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aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2012
This.. this sums my feelings up perfectly!
Although I did not write it it is a physical representation of my very thougts, perhaps I am still more human than I thought, or you are less human than I think you are...

Anyway, I am probably going to screw up BIG TIME, but I will direct the woman I love here, even though she has a boyfriend she deserves to know. (Oh I am so afraid of the results)
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I would like to commend you on your bravery in sending the woman you love here. I certainly do hope it works out well for you! You never know what life has in store or how things may turn out. You never know, there might be no need to be afraid after all!!
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aaammmsterdddam Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2012
well, somewhere it went wrong, she is now ignoring me :(
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Pheromone-Somniferum Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
This is me now.

Well done.
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shironomitsuki Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
I can relate... awesome job on this one ^^
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oleke Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love it can relate alot ins face :)
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ElleonDire Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is just so speaking my life right now! I absolutely love this!
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KD-5U11Y Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
What type of file is this.......i have some poetry i would like to upload but I'm still a noob and don't know how lol
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I just copy and paste the text into where it says enter text when you submit a new deviation. Or I compose in Sta.sh Writer =) Hope that helps.
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KD-5U11Y Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
TNX =3
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dafelix Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So many people suffer this (unfortunately I relate) which is sad. You hit every spot and dove into every crack, great job!
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am so sorry :hug: I hope this is not a current issue for you and that you may heal :heart:
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dafelix Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
No worries, it's not something that brings me down , it's just there. Thanks though! Keep up the good work!
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AL11-scarlettt Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww...I really like this! :)
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you =)
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epicfallen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
wow..this is very expressive and powerful..excellent work on this.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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epicfallen Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
no problem :)
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AviArts Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Its good but im not into emo poems much.
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xXrSoOxRaAsXx Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I love it. <333
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! :heart:
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xXrSoOxRaAsXx Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
You're welcome!
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IvvieWolf Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
story of my life
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm sorry =(
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IvvieWolf Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Eh, it's little baby steps. But I'm glad that I'm not the only one that feels this way. c:
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tonks4life Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
:'( This = the past 7 years wrapped into a few lines for me.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
7 years?? Really? ='( That is horrible, I sure hope it changes for you soon. :heart:
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tonks4life Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012
Thanks...
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NicoleRockzxD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
this is EXACTLY how i feel...
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I am sorry you feel this way =( It isn't nice at all :hug:
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NicoleRockzxD Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Digital Artist
yeah. ;c
but hopefully i'll try to ffix it... slowly.
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ayby Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
All these emotions describes so accurately in these letters. :cry:



:llama:
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, love the llama btw ^.^
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nativerawker4life123 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
This describes my currant crush. He was so nice to me the first day I met him. He was sweet, kind, funny, and I thought for once, this guy was actually different from all the other guys I liked. I was wrong, of course. The Valentines Dance was coming up, and I was going to ask him, but I was nervous, and it took a while for me to build up the courage, but once I did, he was with another girl, laughing, holding hands And I heard him, I heard him say, "I love you." to that girl. And my friend just got over her break-up with her boyfriend, then she had to help me get over it. But for some reason, whenever I see him, I still get that feeling, the feeling when you really like someone, and you just can't help but feel light-headed, as if you're dancing on clouds, and all those butterflies. But from the dance, to this day, he doesn't notice me any more.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwh hun I am so sorry :hug: that is really tough to deal with. It would be so wonderful if we could choose the ones we fall in love with and choose not to love the ones who we can never have. It's so painful to love someone from afar. I wish I could offer you something to help you heal, but I am afraid I don't have any answers =( :hug: if you ever need to talk please feel free to message me :heart:
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nativerawker4life123 Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012
Awwwww!! Thank you so much!! Y'know, you just gave me more support than some of my class-mates. :/ You're so helpful, thanks you so much. Your words mean, so much, Imma think 'bout them the next time I see him, walking down the hall.... With.... Her >_< Well, thanks, with your support, I just might get over him :')
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dontcrossmeX Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student General Artist
this, i feel, comes from the heart, and i'm sorry that he can't see you. Your beautiful.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you. It's not so much that he can't see me, its more that circumstances won't allow us to be together and sometimes it just really hurts. It's during those times that I wish I could just turn my feelings off =(
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dontcrossmeX Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
i know how you feel. It probably seems that somebody can't know how you feel at a time like this, but trust me, i do. Hm, I've been saying that alot lately, I wish you would though. "If they can't see past the glass, why do still ask them to see you?". It means that if the cant see past what's on the outside and see the real you, why do you try. Your beautiful, remember that.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I absolutely love that. I am going to say that to people when applicable. Thank you so much :heart:
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dontcrossmeX Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student General Artist
Your welcome! and glad you liked that qoute. It's actually something i say to my friends and their guy problems, believe it or not, I am the person who origonally said that. ( who says that i can't qoute myself? ) I thought it would fit in with whats happening right now, and i guess it did. glad i could help!
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7Ninja7Shadow7Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Awwwww! that is so sweet yet sadish! I love it!
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, I am glad you liked it =)
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7Ninja7Shadow7Wolf Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No need to say thank you. I am the one who should be saying thank you for making such an awesome poem. XD
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wolfystarshine Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2012  Student Writer
i feel this same exact way about my boyfriend.. and yet explaining to him that it is not desperation but in fact love seems impossible good job ^^
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