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Can you hear that?
Those voices -
Those demonic, frightening voices
Dull vibrations, static noise
Clear as misty fields in the dead of winter
Screams so loud they may shatter my skull
With their deadly bassline

Can you see them?
Why can't you see them??
Distorted faces, rotting flesh
Pitch black eyes and gaping wounds
Hidden in a corner; fetal position
"Our Father who art in heaven - 
Hail Mary, full of grace."

It isn't real
This can't be real!
Futile reassurance lull me to sleep
Grasp my wrist and paint a perfect picture
Agonizing howls ring out into the night
Left with the scars of their mutilation
Silence falls as the knife hits the floor -

And they're no where to be found
100 themes challenge - 12. Insanity. Hope you guys like =) I suck with this stupid challenge v.v
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StoryTellingChoir Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
I really enjoyed reading this. You have a lot of interesting angles on things, once again amazing imagery and you really pull me in, emotionally. Awesome ~
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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StoryTellingChoir Featured By Owner Sep 7, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome ^^
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
omg this poem is amazing
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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DomoSushiLuver Featured By Owner May 6, 2012
no prob
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BeautyPanda Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No you don't. I like it. Did I get this challenge already? *thinking hard* I don't remember....can you give me one? I'd like to try it out.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks =) Give you one? From the 100 poems challenge list thingy?
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BeautyPanda Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome. Yes please!
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
There's so many I wouldn't know what to suggest! How about.. 61. Fairy Tale or 92. All That I Have? I can send you the list if you would prefer.
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Rosenelle Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
could you possibly also send the list to me? This is amazing btw. all your work is DO NOT give up. I want to read ALL OF IT! you are very talented. You can paint such a vivid picture its entrancing
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Done! Wow, thank you so much. I do not feel my writing is deserving of such praise.
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BeautyPanda Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
If you sent me the list I would like it very much. I will go 1ith 92, I'll do more than 1 if you send me the list. :D
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BeautyPanda Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
*with...oops...I'm currently running on a 20oz of Mountain Dew
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Gary-thedreamingpoet Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Professional Writer
Stay with the challenge! This is better than you think and completing the challenge really helped me improve my poetry I think! :heart:
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm slowly getting through it. A lot slower than I first anticipated. But with any luck I'll be finished by the end of the year, although I doubt that :lmao:
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DessertsAreStressed Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Student Writer
Oh, wow... amazing. I can almost see the person wreathing in pain...
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much, I'm glad you liked it =)
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DessertsAreStressed Featured By Owner Apr 7, 2012  Student Writer
Ur welcome!
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135711cal Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012
but they smiled so sweetly
at first, angelic, loving,
I didn't know until after.

I like your poem
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you so much!
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Lincon6Echo Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like this a lot! It's a very good expression of insanity, which is pretty hard to visualize for a sane person.
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you! I am glad it came out the way I had hoped =)
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RiverSong0708 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Student Writer
I really enjoyed this! Quite tantalizing and it definitely bears an "insanity" vibe~
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BellaBugia Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it =D
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